中考英文作文模板（事物介绍型说明文）
中考英文作文模板（事物介绍型说明文）
第一部分 说明文之事物类体裁解读及写法点拨
【 体裁解读 】
事物说明文是以介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等方面的特征。说明的目的是给读者提供知识，使之理解客观世界，掌握解决问题的方法。对中学生而言，事物说明文的出题形式为文字、图标、图表、文体则可见于短文、书信、便条、日记等。写说事物明文必须注意事实准确，表达清晰，条理清楚，层次分明，语言简练，用词准确。
【 写法点拨 】
要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点：
1. 要善于抓住事物的特征
介绍事物，一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征，就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征，才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。
2. 要遵循一定的顺序
介绍一件事物，目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等，因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物：
（1）时间顺序，即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。
（2）空间顺序，即按事物空间位置的顺序，由上至下，由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。
（3）逻辑顺序，即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明，如由概括到具体，由整体到部分，由现象到本质，由表及里，由原因到结果，由主要到次要，由特点到用途等。
3. 运用恰当的语言
介绍事物，文字要力求简洁、明白、准确。除讲究语言平实准确的前提下，我们还可以运用描写的方法，来增添文章的可读性。
注意事项
事物说明文的主要特点：一是知识性和科学性，二是应用性和解说性，三是行文的条理性。写这类文章宜少用描写，要用具体翔实的材料说明问题，而不要抽象、空洞的讨论。语言要简洁、准确、条理要清楚。讨论问题是要集中，切忌面面俱到。
说明文的时态常用一般现在时，语态常用被动语态，有时用虚拟语气。
第二部分 说明文之事物类万能黄金模板
（一）
① is located in （位置） ，covering square meters. （面积） .It is a open space surrounded by .
②On the northwest side stands （西北边的建筑） .On the northeast is （东北边的建筑） . (南边的建筑） lies on the south.
(北边的建筑） is on the north. In the middle of the square, there is （中间的建筑） . Not far away .
③I hope .
注：
①总起全文，引出要介绍的场所
②从各个方位介绍该场所
③总结，表达希望
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
（二）
The table below shows that （说明问题或现象）. （数据） percent （现象一） . （数据） percent （现象二） . （数据） percent （现象三） .
In my opinion （自己的观点或感受） .
第三部分 必备词汇与套用句型
【 必备亮点词汇 】
1. 表示形状：round, square, long, tall, short, triangular(三角形的)…
2. 表示材料：wood, wool, cotton, metal, plastic, gold …
3. 表示特点：important, common, sweet, crispy, sour, salty, hard, soft, delicious, nice, fresh, pleasant, popular …
【 经典套用句型 】
1. It's 400 meters long / wide / high. 它有400米长/宽/高。
2. The ruler is as long as that one. 这把尺子与那把一样长。
3. It's made of / from wood. 它是由木材做成的。
4. All that we can do is to ...... 我们所能做的就是……
5. It is quite clear that ...... 十分清楚的是……
6. There are some reasons for ......关于……有以下理由。
第四部分 模板范文演练
英文有句谚语“East, west, home's the best.”某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。
提示：
1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80,开头已给出，不计入总词数。
East, west, home's the best.
There is an old saying,
“East, west, home's the best.”
【 万能模板套用分析 】
首先，引出写作话题。→话题
其次，对家的情况进行具体介绍。→具体介绍
最后，表达自己的想法。→表达想法
满分范文
East, west, home's the best.
There is an old saying,“East, west, home's the best.”I couldn't agree more.
My home is located in ( 短语优先原则）the center of the city. It is surrounded by many tall buildings and shopping centers, but life is very convenient here. ① There are three bedrooms, one living room, one kitchen and one bathroom.
②（长短句结合原则，前面是but连接的并列句，此处是there be句型）There are three people in my family: my parents and l. My parents care about me very much. My family is full of happiness and joy.
I want to help my parents do housework as much as I can because I'm a part of my family and I want to make it better.
③ ( 句式多变原则，because引导原因状语从句）
你也可以这样表达
① Located in the center of the city, my home is surrounded by many tall buildings and shopping centers, but life is very convenient here.
② My home is made up of three bedrooms, one living room, one kitchen and one bathroom.
③ Being a part of my family and wanting to make it better, I'd like to help my parents do housework as much as I can.
范文译文
东好，西好，家里最好
有句俗话说得好：“东好西好，家里最好。”我再同意不过了。
我的家位于市中心。它被很多高楼大厦和购物中心环绕，但是在这里生活很方便。家里有三个卧室，一个客厅，一个厨房和一个卫生间。我们家有三个人：我父母和我。我的父母非常关心我。我家里充满了幸福和欢乐。
我想尽可能帮助父母做家务，因为我是家庭的一分子，我想让我家变得更好。
第五部分 热点话题满分叙事记叙文必背
（一）
每年的六一儿童节都会有很多孩子前往上海迪斯尼乐园游玩。假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。
注意：
1. 词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：theme n.主题；firework n.烟火
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
【习作范文】
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland. I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It's made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there' re lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
（二）
假如你是李强，有一天在上学路上，你看到赵王河公园河岸边的道路损坏严重，一些彩砖不见去向，影响人们的出行。请用英语给China Daily山东菏泽频道写一封信，反映这一问题，并提出你的看法和建议。
(一)参考词汇：destroy毁坏；color bricks彩砖；disappear消失；repair修复；take measures采取措施；protect保护；public facilities公共设施
(二)其他要求：100字左右，开头和结尾己给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Editor,
I'm a high school student.
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Li Qiang
【习作范文】
Dear Editor,
I'm a high school student. I'm writing to tell you something bad about Zhaogonghe Park. One day, on my way to school, I found that the road along the bank of Zhaogonghe Park was destroyed badly. Some color bricks disappeared. It is said that some bricks were thrown into the river and some were taken home by villagers nearby. The road has had a bad influence on people's coming and going. I think it should be repaired as soon as possible. We should take measure to protect the road. It is important and necessary to take good care of the public facilities in the park.
I hope China Daily can care about the matter and give us some advice on how to protect the park.
Li Qiang
(三）
题目
Write a short passage in at least 60 words about the topic The best gift I’ve received
审题
这是一篇全命题的说明文，要求学生对“收到的最好礼物”进行描述说明。写作时可以围绕what is the gift，what is it like" ，"why do you like it"和"what make it special"这几个问题展开。首先写明最好的礼物是什么，该礼物来自谁等基础信息。其次，可以对礼物的特点进行简要描写。特别需要注意的是，本文非常重要的内容应该是点明为什么这是最好的礼物，即说明该礼物的特殊意义和重要性。
段落结构
本文的结构相对灵活，建议采用三段式，即“总一分一总” 的写作结构:
第一段(开头):引出话题，写明收到最好的礼物是什么。
第二段(中心段):文章的中心部分。依次说明礼物的特点、对“我”的意义等。
第三段(结尾):文章的结尾段，对全文进行总结，对礼物的意义进行适当的升华。
习作1
Among all the gifts I have received, the one I like best is a handmade calendar.
It was made by my best friend Jane. She was my my best friend in the junior high school. She gave it to me when we graduated. On each page of the calendar，there is a picture of lane and me with some words written by her.
She tells me how she feels about our friendship and encourages me to try my bet and live a happy life. Whenever I’ll look at the calendar. I am touched by something warm, and my heart is filled with love.
The calendar is a memory of the wonderful time we spent together in junior high school. I will keep this special gift forever.
点评:
这篇习作行文流畅，感情真挚动人。对于礼物“日历”的描写比较详细具体，使更得读者能够体会作者的情感。同时，这篇习作结构完整，句式较为丰富，作者使用了定语从人句、宾语从句、时间状语从句、被动语态、非谓语等，使全文读来流畅生动。
习作2
People give gifts to each other to show their love and friendship. For many years, I've always kept a little puppet which was from one of my old friends, Jane.
She was my next-door neighbor and we became best friends soon. On the day when my family moved to a new apartment, she gave me a lovely glove puppet. The puppet is made of cloth and wears red clothes. She is a cute girl, so I name her 'Cutie'. She has accompanied me ever since. So Cutie is just like my little sister. When I have some secrets, I just talk to Cutie and she is like an old friend who understands me. I always share happiness with her. When I feel unhappy, it’s a comfort to tell her my trouble.
Wherever I go, I often take Cutie with me. This is my favorite gift, a common puppet, but she means so much to me that I will cherish her forever.
点评:
该生的这篇习作行文连贯，过度自然。结构完整，安排合理。写作思路清晰，内容紧扣主题，有真情实感。语言流畅生动，用词准确，句式丰富，多处使用定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等。