中考英文作文模板（通信邮件型应用文）

中考英语作文模板（通信邮件型应用文）

第一部分 应用文之普通书信体裁解读及写法点拨

【体裁解读】

信函和信件是中考中最常见的应用文写作类型，是人们相互交流信息的书面通讯方式。从写作对象上看，信函和信件通常分为公开信和私人信。从写作内容上看，信件(信函)主要有建议信、推荐信、求助信、告别信、感谢信等，中考中曾经出现过的写作类别为建议信。此外，信件(信函)还分为初次写信和写回信。因此，考生应当仔细审题，根据不同的信件(信函)类别写作。

【书信写法点拨】

在英语信件(信函)写作中尤其要注意书写格式:英文书信由信头、称呼、正文、结束语、结尾谦称几部分组成。

1.信头。指写信人的地址和写信日期，写于信纸右上角。地址由小到大写，日期写在地址下。称呼顶格写在左上角，后面的标点用逗号。

2.称呼。常以Dear开头，如果不清楚收信人性别，则写Dear Sir or Madam。

3.正文。在称呼下一行开始，可顶格，也可段首缩进。正文的开头通常有两类:

(1)主动给对方写信，开头应当写明写信的目的或背景，再详细叙述。

常用开头有:I am writing to you to...我写信给你是为了.....

I am sorry to hear that ...得知....我很难过。

I am very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about ...很高兴写信给你，最近我们正在谈论.....

It's been a long time since we met last time.我们已经好久不见了。

(2)写回信给对方，开头应当先表明感谢收到来信。常用开头有:

Thank you for your letter From your letter I  learnt  that ..感谢你的来信，从你的信中，我得----.

I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.抱歉没有早些回信。

I am glad you ask me for help.感谢你向我求助。

4.结束语。在正文下自成段，表达祝愿或希望。常用的结束语有:

Best wishes! 请接受我的美好祝福!

Looking forward to your reply! 期待你的回信!

I hope to hear from you soon.期待不久能收到你的回复。

Hope my suggestions will be helpful.希望我的建议能帮到你。

I hope what I said can help you.希望我说的对你有所助益。

Have a good time! 过得愉快!

5.结尾谦称。写于结束语下一行。如正文左顶格写，结尾谦称也左顶格。如正文段结尾谦称则从信偏右的地方开始写。注意首字母大写，后面使用逗号。常用的谦称有:Yours,

Yours ever,

Yours sincerely,

Truly yours,

Yours respectfully,

第二部分 应用文之普通书信万能黄金模板

Dear            ，（称呼）

①Haven't seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.

②I'm writing to             .（写作意图）Firstly,            .（做法一）Secondly,             .（做法二）Thirdly,            （做法三）Fourthly,             （做法四）。

③

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

模板内容要点

①与联系人寒暄

②具体阐述写作意图并叙述做法或建议

③表达祝范

注：模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。

第三部分  必备词汇与套用句型

【必备亮点词汇】

【经典套用句型】

闪亮篇首句

Haven't seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.好久不见了，很高兴收到你的来信。

Your letter came to me this morning.今天早上我收到了你的来信。

I'm writing to ask if...我写信是想问问是否······

I'm writing to inform you that...我写信是通知你·····

Sorry to reply to your letter so late.很抱歉这么晚给你回信。

There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.再也没有比收到你的信让我更开心的了。

出彩篇中句

I have been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter.我一直在思考你来信中提到的问题。图解

We consider it not proper to...我们认为·····不合适。

It's polite to greet teachers whenever we meet them.每当我们见到老师时，应该向他们问好，这是礼貌的。

We are supposed to get along well with each other and help each other to make progress together.我们应该和谐相处，互相帮助，共同进步。

精彩篇尾句

Please give my regards to your family.请代我向你家人问好。

I wish you still further success.预祝你取得更大的成功。

I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.我希望尽快能收到你的回信。

Wish you a pleasant journey.祝你旅行愉快。

第四部分 模板范文演练

假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室（dormitory)规定，如不整理床铺，休息时间大声接打电话，未经许可（permission)动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。

要求：

1.包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.字数：60~80词（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

3.信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。

Dear Wang Ming,

I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. 

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【万能模板套用分析】

首先，引出主题，点名写作目的。（已给出）→ 主题

其次，交代具体问题。→ 具体问题

最后，表达祝愿。→ 祝愿

【满分范文】

Dear Wang Ming,

I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. Since we are living in the same dormitory together now, it is better to obey the rules and show respect to others. ① Firstly(一二三原则，使用了过渡词。），when you get up, you’d better make your bed. If your bed is neat and clean, I believe that it will be more comfortable to stay in the dormitory. (句式多变原则，使用if引导的条件状语从句。）Secondly, when everyone is sleeping, you shouldn't make phone calls. ② If it is an urgent call, you may answer it outside the dormitory. Thirdly, you should not use or move others' personal belongings without permission. ③Fourthly, to save energy and money, you should turn off the light before you leave the dormitory. Only all of us follow the rules can we have a good time(短语优先原则。）in the dormitory.

Best wishes.

Li Hua

你也可以这样表达

① Now that we are living in the same dormitory, we are required to obey the rules and show respect to others.

② Secondly, making phone calls is not appropriate when everyone is sleeping.

③ Thirdly, using or moving others' personal belongings without permission is forbidden.

【范文译文】

亲爱的王明：

我写信是想友好地提醒你宿舍的规定。既然我们现在都住在同一间宿舍，遵守规定和尊重他人较好。第一，当你起床后，你最好整理一下床铺。如果你的床是整洁干净的，我相信待在宿舍里会更加舒服。第二，当所有人都在睡觉时，你不能打电话。如果是紧急电话，你可以在宿舍外面接。第三，没有别人的允许，你不能使用或移动其他人的私人物品。第四，为了节能省钱，你应该在离开宿舍前关灯。只有我们所有人都遵守规定，我们才能在宿舍中过得愉快。

最美的祝愿。

李华

第五部分  热点话题满分叙事记叙文必背

（一）

随着我们不断成长，生活不仅给予了我们许多快乐时光，同时伴随不少烦恼．仔细阅读下面小华写给英语报社的信，结合自己的实际，运用所学知识，请你以编辑的名义，就他的烦恼在回信中给出好的建议．

Dear sir，

I'm Xiaohua，15，a middle school student． I have some problems to tell you， my parents always say to me， "Study， study， do homework， do your homework． " when I come back． However，they don' t know how hard I study at school from 7：00 am to 8：30 p．m． every day．

And last Sunday， my 3-year-old brother troubled me again and again while I was studying for the coming exam． I really wanted to get better grades， so I couldn't stand him any more， I shouted at him in anger， thus he cried loudly． Then my mother came in， she blamed me without asking "why"．

My eyes were full of tears at that time． It was not my fault． Why did she treat me like that？Didn't mother love me？ After all． I'm also her birth child， My dear editor， what can I do？ Could you give me some suggestions？

Sincerely，

Xiaohua

要求：

（1）卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感）．

（2）全文字数不少于90词．书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入单词总数．

（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确．

（4）内容尽量就小华的烦恼给出好的建议，并适当发挥：文中不能出现真实的人名、地名．

Dear Xiaohua，

I'm glad to receive your letter． I have ever had the same experience． I even had a fight with my parents．But now, I fully understand them．

I hope these help!

Tony

【参考范文】

Dear Xiaohua，

I'm glad to receive your letter． I have ever had the same experience． I even had a fight with my parents．But now， I fully understand them．（开篇表明自己也碰到过）

First，As parents，their dream is that one day you can get good grades．So they put emphasis on homework every day．Why not talk with your parents？【高分句型一】 you can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it．Or you can help them do some housework after school．Second，For your little brother，He is just a baby．He is glad to see you after your coming back from school．So  he wants to play with you．Why don't you play with him for a few minutes．And you also can tell him that you have something important to do．Maybe he will get your point．At last，Believe your parents．They all love you forever．All you need to do is communication．Then you will get on well with your parents and brother【高分句型一】．（针对对方的信提出三点建议）

I hope these help! （结尾给出期望）

Tony

（二）

假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。

写作要点：

1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。

2. 介绍学校：

    (1) 课程有趣；

    (2) 有多名外教；

    (3) 活动丰富。

3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。

写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear new friends,

It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.

Yours,

Li Ping

【写作思路】

这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【参考范文】

Dear new friends,

It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after-class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.

Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class. I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

（三）

假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。

提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for

Dear Tony,

It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.

I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Tony,

It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.

People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns, and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.

I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.

Yours,

Li Hua

（四）

假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历．用英语回信开导他。

注意：

l. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；

2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Nathan,

I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days.

I hope my experience can help you out.

Best wishes

Su Hua

【写作思路】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

【参考范文】

Dear Nathan,

I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.

Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.

It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.

I hope my experience can help you out.

Best wishes.

Su Hua

【名师点评】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

（五）

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。

要求：

(1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；

(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80~100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Milk,

I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen(生态公民), we did a good job. Last

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。

【参考范文】

Dear Mike,

I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they also knew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day.

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。